Teen Poetry #3 |
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Found out too late |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
She told me love is blind. I'd see what I want to see. That's why it hit me so hard, When you walked out on me. I though that things were perfect, Up to that very day. I was standing there in shock, As I watched you drive away. The signs were always around. You working every night. Secret phone calls and letters, That led to many fights. We never had a real love, Just a bad case of lust. Once that attraction wore off, You no longer had my trust. What really makes me sad is, We thought our love was true. And it took us way to long, To figure what friends knew. It took me longer than you, To see that things should end. Too bad we found out too late, Or we could have stayed friends. Dedicated to my best bud...We tried our hand at love, separated, then came to our senses and figured we still needed eachother, as just friends though. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey i'm glad it worked out for you in the end..your poem is very beautiful. Now night arrives with her purple legions Retire now to your tents & to your dreams Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth I want to be ready. - JM |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very happy things worked out for you. Best of luck and great poem. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
nice poem, unfortunately, these things happen |
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hi there! I'm so sorry that things didn't work out in your relationship, but I'm so glad that you are still able to be friends. This is a great piece. ![]() If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a diffrent drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away-Throeau [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 09-10-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wicced~~~Wow good poem!!!I think that maybe at one point in everyones life they hook up with their best friends...I know that I have...When it ended between the 2 of us I couldnt even talk to him...Then 4 months later I finally had the courage to do it...But things arent the same...Its good to hear that yous 2 are friends still...Keep up the good work!!! ![]() ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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