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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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~*~YOU....~*~ You proved me wrong when I thought I was no good, by helping me to live my life the way I should. You showed me life could get much better then this, when you gave me that one sweet kiss. You reached into the deepest part of my heart, and showed me a journey in which I should start. You have changed my life in so many ways, and given me so many happy days. Lately I've been thinking about you, and how my life wouldnt be complete without you. Sorry Virgin Suicide I just noticed that you have a poem with the same exact title. < !signature--> ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Seems to be a popular title around here!  It's great to have someone who makes you feel this way. Even when you lose them, you are grateful that you felt this. You describe the feeling well. Keep up the great work!< !signature--> If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a diffrent drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away" -Thoreau [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Lovebug~~~I wasnt even thinking when I put the title...I just put that as the title so it would have one...I still thank god till this day that I have them in my life...Thank you for the reply...  ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
NO no wait! The title is not the same cuz you have DOTS!!!!!! Hers is "You"....yours is "You...." See!!!!!!!! Anyway....the poem is sweet. Hope things keep goin like this for u  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
LOL Dopey I didnt even think of that...But still its almost the same...But thanks for the reply!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Me gusta! Pero, me gustan todo poema de su! < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ for those spanish speakers, if I screwed it up...correct me por favor! It's been a while and I am un poco rusty! gracias! If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jessica~~~Thanks for the reply...But do you mind translating it for me...Sorry I wasnt into learning in Spanish it was more of a nap time for me...I didnt understand it mostly the teachers fault...So please do me a favor and be my translater... ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
This is a very cute poem! Keep up the great work! Lots of love ELMO <3 |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
I don't mind!! Guess it's like a very popular title!! Must be more poem called You...SO it's no big deal!! But it's really sweet, this one!!! love, Virgin Suïcide! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thanks for the replies you guys...I really appreciate them... Virgin~~~Thats true who knows how many poems are called you on this website right now!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
That poem was very sweet and touching. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very cute little piece here.....  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
HEY!!!!! You title thief!!!! just kiddin...It was a neato poem...;you should IM mean later...I know I'll be on...I'm just bored like that and I will be later too.. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thanks for the replies!!!I didnt think that I would get this many replies seeing that I am a title thief!!!LOL You are goofy Jeremy!!!< !signature--> ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-11-2000).] |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
What great words used. I love the style *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ender~~~Thanks for the reply!!!Im glad you liked it!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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