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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-09-06 08:08 PM

I'm not myself,
Without you near.

You showed me,
My true self.

And made me show,
It to the world.

I feel so close to you,
I just can't explain it.

It feels almost like,
You created me.

As I stand before you,
I see my creator.

There is a part,
Of you in I.

As well as,
I in you.

Its been a year since we met,
But I was still empty then.

You lit a spark,
In my teared eyes.

Now my life is full,
Of love for you.

The first night you held me close,
I was still an empty shell.

But the moment you held me,
Our hearts were beating as one.

You soon disappeared,
But I thought of you.

Then you came back,
And held me close.

Its been a month,
Since you came back.

I feel closer to you,
Everyday I'm with you.

Once again my eyes are teared,
Not of sadness, but of joy.

For I know,
You love me too.

You tell me,
All the time.

Since the day I met you,
I've changed and they know.

They never saw my smile,
Until, the night we met.

So to you, dearest Irvin,
Thank you, and I love you.

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

1 posted 2000-09-06 08:11 PM

AWWWW How sweet Tamma! I absolutely loved it! It was so emotional...*sniff* but I enjoyed it!

~*~SCG~*~

[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 09-06-2000).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-07 12:52 PM

Tamma~~~This is so sweet...Is this about the guy that you are with now???

YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-09-07 06:12 AM

Very sweet and tender sentiments Tamma ... your happiness shines through your words! Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

4 posted 2000-09-07 05:09 PM

Yup Erin...Irvin is my current,and it will be a month tomorrow.

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.

thebeautybrat
Member

since 2000-03-30

Posts 114
Florida

5 posted 2000-09-07 05:23 PM

i love this poem. it's so sweet!! awww!! good work!! keep writing!!

When you love someone write their name in a circle...not a heart.A heart can be broken but a circle goes on forever.

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

6 posted 2000-09-10 09:51 AM

Thanx beautybrat! To be honest, I've never felt like this about any one person, ever, in my life... I love this feeling

and I just found out this morning that he told my dad that he was planning on sticking around a while

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.

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