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The truth |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
The truth in life is place to see, Surly it is good not to revolve round me, For we all find our way into it, Some of us belive in such a manner the we are gods, If we were why do we still live in such chaos, We are not God we are under him and it drive some people to the point of rebelling, Such a world we live in, We get created, Now we want to be the creator, Why??? Power! Pure holy Godly Power! Such Power cannot be help be humans, We cannot obtain to be God, For in our birth we would surly find death, So in the truth, We of course find life  For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i like the idea of the poem. I totally agree with you on these lame ass scientist and goverment workers and all these damn people tryin to become holy Gods of nothingness. Anyway, maybe you should brush up on the wording of the poem, but other than that...keep it up bud. adios!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Nicely done Jytree! So often, we get caught up in the meaning of life, that we forget to live it ... this reminds me to be thankful, and live day to day! Nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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