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You're my imperfect perfection.
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You're my imperfect perfection. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I miss a happiness I cannot regain, I yearn for love that never quite existed. I only want to put an end to the pain, My soul's core is fractured and twisted. He will never return, none of them will, But there you stand, with an open heart. You're prepared to love, ready to thrill. You're what I need, a new life trying to start. Look up and see you, elated; yet you fighten me... I don't know if I want to take this risk, could it be true? You offer a world I've a long time lived without, it is something I would like to see. I see you as a perfection I may not deserve, I am leary to trust my heart, when it always lets me down. I'd like to attempt this love, but I may not have the nerve. In not loving, I cannot hurt; I am safe...I will not fail, and will not drown. [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-05-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very negative poem! I liked it but damn was it negative. I say GO FOR IT jenn.....love is something that is hard to let in with some people.....but....im telling you....in passing up a chance you'll always end up wondering of the WOuld have's and the Could have's.......so yea....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I swear to you-know-who, you're Joey! You must have lived with him, or maybe you're a long lost twin. You two could have a two-person party and never get bored! Wow. It's kinda scary. Your mannerisms are so alike... Yeah, I'm usually not so negative, I just felt like venting. Thanks for the comments. Jenn |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jenn~~~I love it...It may talk about a little negativity but it is just perfect...You have a really good style that you write with...I mean one day your not rhyming and it sounds perfect...Then now you are rhyming and it is so good...I really wish I could do that...But I cant...Keep up the good work!!!  ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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