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sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-09-05 11:04 AM

I see your face
And you're gone
I feel your warmth
And I'm cold

I feel your love
And I am empty
I feel your joy
And sadness consumes me

I feel your touch
And it's gone
I see your eyes
But it's just a memory

I hear your words
I hear your promises
"I'll never leave you"
But it was all a lie

~*~SCG~*~

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2000-09-05 11:27 AM

I am pleased that this is not about you... (from your other poem) but great sentiments...

regards O sweet Lavada
Sudhir

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

2 posted 2000-09-05 11:45 AM

Thanks Sudhir, and I'm not as sweet as you think

LOL Just kidding

~*~SCG~*~

"Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Author Unknown

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-05 11:49 AM

SCG~~~I like this one!!!It was really good...

I cant wait to read your other poem now!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

4 posted 2000-09-05 11:54 AM

Thanks ERIN, I appreciate your reply!

~*~SCG~*~

"Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Author Unknown

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-09-05 07:23 PM

Wonderful contracts Lavada ... very well done the powerful back and forth motion in this!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

6 posted 2000-09-05 10:21 PM

I loved this Vada...very nicely writ I must say! Short but full of emotion. You can practicly picture them, well I have imagination for emotions I guess. Great job

Salma
PS Check ICQ

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2000-09-06 02:58 PM

Very nicely written, I like it

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

8 posted 2000-09-06 07:49 PM

Thanks Salma, Kit, and Lakewalker! All your replies are appreciated!

Salma: Sorry it's short! I'll make a long one for ya if you want me to!

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