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Teen Poetry #3

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Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-09-03 11:12 AM

I wish you could feel the pain that I’ve felt
burning deep inside.
I wish you knew what it was like
to want to curl up and die.
But mostly I wish you knew the results of the pressure they apply--
Do this.
Do it now.
Give in.
Put out.
And they wonder why I cry!
I sit here and say to myself,
“Why do they ask why?
All the while forgetting,
that all I need is time”

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

1 posted 2000-09-03 02:31 PM

Wow that's really good. I think I know how you feel........are you a perfectionist too? Well keep up the writing it's great
Bel

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2000-09-03 02:53 PM

Your poem is very emotionally strong. I could just feel it. I'm sorry that people have to make you go thru that. Don't let em bother you like that. They ain't worth it specially if they ask you for something you're not ready for. That's all they want then what? Leave you crying again after everything has been given. DON'T LET EM DO THAT TO YOU. There are others that will respect you more.

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-04 03:17 AM

Do this.
Do it now.
Give in.
Put out.

Wow!!!This is good!!!These lines mean alot to me...I was pressured into losing my virginity...It was from someone really close to me too...I was drunk and I was pressured and you know what...That night I lost something that I can never get back...And I wish I could turn back time and go back to that day...Dont let people try and talk you into doing anything...

Keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

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