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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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How dare she take you away from me I thought you would be mine you spoke of your love for me so many times You made me feel like a princess there was nothing i wanted more You told me such sweet things and whipered the words i wanted to hear We are meant to be, you said and i believed you But then she swooped in and stole your love I took you for granted i thought youd always wait i was wrong and now i cry the tears burn my face and sting my eyes I thought you'd always be mine but you were never mine to begin with Im sorry........ The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
It's a great poem, but it's so sad. Like I've said before love is strange, and works in strange ways I guess. I feel so bad for you, but I don't know what to tell you. Just keep your chin up, you'll find someone out there! Smile!  And keep writingBel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"the tears burn my face and sting my eyes I thought you'd always be mine but you were never mine to begin with" I love that line. Hey, if it's meant to be, he'll be back. I told that to someone i knew and she wouldn't believe me. Now she's happy cause he's back in her life. I know it's hard cause I'm in the same situation, but I'm still alive i guess. Stay strong!!! I wrote a poem about taking someone for granted too...read it and it might help you feel better. It's "a repost--just want girls to know how guys feel" the first one. I just reposted the second one so don't mistake that. Hope it helps. Be strong and stay strong As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I really like your poem, partly because I've been in this situation before. But why are YOU apologizing to him? Don't feel guilty for loving him, your heart has a mind of its own. Peace out! *~Meredith~* I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
There is only one oxymoron that could possibly describe this poem: Bittersweet! Your poem is wonderful, but I agree with the others, you should not apologize, for you can not control the way you feel. Just keep your head up and be patient. If it is meant to be you will be awakened. Best of Luck. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jen~~~You have no reason to be sorry...I had somewhat an experience like this...I had 2 best friends, one guy and one girl best friend...Well one night at a party they decided since I was best friends with both of them it would be ok with me for them to get together...They were wrong I lost my girl friend for 2 months and him for 4 months...It shattered my heart and it took me that long to forgive them both for what they did to me...Now I dont trust her around my boyfriend if she is drinking cuz who knows what she may try with him...But I know he wouldnt do anything with her...Keep up the good work!!! "Someone once said if you want something very badly set it free. If it comes back to you its yours forever. If it doesnt it was never yours to begin with." I hope you get back together with this guy if he is worth it...Cuz if he did it once he just may do it again!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
thank you all for oyur comments but actualy i was neevr going out with this guy we just both had strong feelings for each other...........my story is pretty complicated cos i have a b/f whom i really love but i can't deny my feelings for this other guy........im messed up and confused! anyway thanx! Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~  The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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