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the subject ? as always...: my life...
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the subject ? as always...: my life... |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
This poem is quite special to me, this poem says how I felt my whole life actually... I came by the idea when I was reading about Plato's Cave-filosofy... sorry if the poem looks weird..but hey..that's me !!! greetz and thanks, Robin Boxed-in Phobia Here for these walls and crushin Dyslexia false words and flushing I can’t think straight no more Here I am boxed-in for... This life just makes me insane Boxed-in phobia just makes me deranged Still I don’t know why I’m caged Boxed-in phobia made my pain, named my pain... In time darkness passes by Then the light will blind me all the time I’ll step to the edge of the world Cried and fallen, the sickness made me hurl blinded by darkness... I will not know, what is real The cave I slept in, the thing I feel Maybe all this, is just fake Please just help, untill I’m awake ! This life just makes me insane Boxed-in phobia just makes me deranged Still I don’t know why I’m caged Boxed-in phobia made my pain, named my pain... A sheer path couldn’t lead my sight Like a fallen soul, into the dark from the light My simple mind, was all I could bare My box of fears was all I could bare Where am I ? help me it’s dark... help me...help me...help me...HELP ME.... HELP ME !!! now.... I’M JUST BLINDED BY DARKNESS LET ME FREE !!! I AM HERE !!! WHERE AM I ?! I AM HERE !!! WHERE AM I ?! maybe knowone will understand what I say, but I trust you....’cause you will...you will....YOU WILL !!! This life just makes me insane Boxed-in phobia just makes me deranged Still I don’t know why I’m caged Boxed-in phobia made my pain, named my pain... I AM HERE I AM HERE I AM HERE I AM HERE !!! for now... |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
I really liked this it was unique and creative great work Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~  The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow very impressive! Speechless...don't know what to say. Very nice, extremely interesting. Keep writing it's great Bel Wow! Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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