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A Sweet Kiss |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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~*~A Sweet Kiss~*~ The 1st sweet kiss from you, was like a piece of priceless gold. That can never be bought, and never be sold. It was so special, a kiss that was so rare. Because you showed me, that you honestly did care. It was a kiss, that even my heart was able to feel. It came straight from you, proving it was real. Now you have opened, many doors of my heart to explore. So just take some time, soon there will be many more. ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey!! Everytime I read a new poem of your's they just keep getting better and better. Keep up the great work!! ure awesome!!  ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey Erin, i did what you said and added a poem to that post i made, go check it out hahaha.... anyway....i liked the poem. You seem to come on here a lot, well i will too from now on. I like your style....Oooo Aaaaa. Yes yes well, ill be running along and wait for another post, reply, topic, and yea. BYE BYE!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Great subject matter! I've ummm, experienced this poem before. HA! Anyway, I approve. *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
DQ~~~I try to make them good...But some dont turn out the way I planned...Where have you been lately???  Dopey~~~I was only telling you that so they would close the topic...Then nobody would have been able to reply to it...Yeah I come to this website all the time...Poetry has just been an intrest to me...Then I found this place...And I love it here!!!  Lyric~~~Being approved by a musician...What more can I ask for...Just when you become famous dont forget about me...LOL  ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
AHHH, Complete relapse into pre-pubertical state!! (Twitching more!) Yesssss, We are returned. Kissing is gross!! Ewww girl cooties! (Twitching…) AHHHHH! Ok, I’m back to normal (haha, that’s a joke). Must stay away from Altoids…. Good poem, yummy words, almost as sweet as a…a Altoid! Mmm, must have more!!! ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
Thats really sweet and i know how that special kiss feels too! When I met you I liked you When I liked you I kissed you When I kissed you I loved you When I loved you I lost you |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Erin, I have to say first of all that this is a great poem, it just has bad timing. My girlfriend and I just broke up and she was a great kisser. Dadgummit!!!! Anyway, keep up the great work whilst I go looking for a new one. Have fun!!! jason Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thank for the replies all of you!!! Deranger~~~Girls have cooties...Your so funny... That really made me smile...Luv~~~Im glad that you like it!!!This kiss was really special to me... Jason~~~Why did you and you girlfriend break up???What did you do now???LOL ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Ah, this is soo sweet! Very nicely written! Kisses can be sweet in the moment, but words keep them there forever... Keep writing.Salma |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Salma~~~Girl thanks for the reply, I really appreciate it...Im glad that you liked it... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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