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Passion of Life |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Passion of Life I look upon the road of life and I begin to see how on earth will I decide the path that best suits me? I lie awake deep in the night feeling so very confused there are so many choices in this world... how am I ever to choose? My future now lies in the hands of today and soon I will have to start to realize what really matters is found deep within my heart. My friends can tell me "go the the left" and my parents can say "no, go to the right!" this battle will go on and on until I let my heart stop the fight. I'll have to find what my passion is and work towards it (without a doubt) turn my hopes into reality not just a vision upon a cloud. My fight to the top will not be easy yes, indeed, I will need to be brave Now there is no time to waste I must go begin my journey today! ~*Yesterday is gone, let go of the past; tommorrow will bring new hope to grasp*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey! This was absolutly wonderful. You captured the questions and decisions of life perfectly. Keep up the great work!! ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Wow.. what a piece! I know it's not easy to make all these choices, but you have lots of ambition and talent. I think you'll do fine!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I have one road I know you should take and that's the road to writing more poems. You put one of the realities in life so perfectly. Everything is a matter of choice, and it's all up to us to decide. We can ask for opinions, but in the end it's still our choice. Great work!!! As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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