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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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~*~Your Smile~*~ The first smile you gave me, turned into something much more. A smile that I will always remember, and that I will always adore. It made me feel happy, in so many different ways. But mainly because, it brightened up my gloomy days. It was so bright, that it shined like a star. Making me feel special, even if it shined from afar. I thought a smile like that, would surely be hard to find. The more & more I thought about it, it was your smile in my mind. ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
great poem ERIN! I loved it!  I like reading your poems!  Keep them coming!~*~SCG~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
“A smile is worth a thousand words”. Or was it a picture that was worth a thousand words? Oh, well, doesn’t really matter. The point is…um, wait, I’m sure I had a point… …Oh here it is! Your work is a blast to read, it’s such a wonderful contrast to DP (where I spend most my time). Great work!!! Hope you see more of that smile! ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
SCG~~~Thanks for the reply im glad that you like it!!! Deranger~~~It doesnt matter which one it is...They both sound right to me!!!  LOL Thanks for your reply!!!~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
as always a wonderful and eloquent post Erin! Your words captivate me! You're awesome girl! Keep it up!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jessica  ~~~I dont know what I would do without you...You are the one person that ALWAYS has the nicest things to say about others work...And I thank you for that...  ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Awwwwwwwww! How sweet. Everyone needs to see a smile like this from time to time. Good show. jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jason~~~I am gonna kick your behind right out of this planet...LOL You are doing this to me on purpose...But thats ok...I dont mind it doesnt bother me one bit...Grrrrrr...Im gonna get you...But anyways till that day comes thanks for the replies!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
'ey, very nice poem, very touching. Reminds me of a couple friends of mine who always seem to be able to cheer me up no matter how sour my mood.  "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desi |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dragon~~~I wrote this poem about my boyfriend...Out of almost everyone's smile his is the best...He just has the most beautiful smile that I have ever seen...It makes my heart melt... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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