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since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
When all is said And everything done My presence still burns Like a billion, burning suns. Whats been revealed Is in words my true self All other gimmicks Like books, cast upon the shelf. What once was driven Now is gone The real me unmasked, And my tru personality I now don. -"Victory needs no explaination, Defeat allows none." |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
nice poem barry it's a great way to announce your new identity here, and the demise of the driven. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ok I like the poem...But I dont understand what jose is talking about...Can you clue me in just a little??? ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Excellent poem..especially these lines Whats been revealed Is in words my true self All other gimmicks Like books, cast upon the shelf. Great  "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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