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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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My eyes sting my body pains my cheeeks are stained with tears that flowed downt hem like rain You broke my heart but not only that you totaly ripped it apart now have nothing more im broken laying on the floor and im alone The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
wow...very expressive poetry, Jenabou. Great show of feelings! Very nice indeed! Keep going at it!  stay cool  ~~Lavada~~  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jen~~~All i can say is WOW!!!this is really good...i like it...keep up the good work...you showed such feelings in this...and i cant wait to read more!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Very nice...it is short, but make no mistake...it is packed with emotion! Lovely poem...keep it up! Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets tr |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I found this to be powerful, you did a great job with it |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
thank you all very much im going thru a tuff time right now im jsut gla di have my poetry to vent my emotions thru Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~  The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
I was like this a while ago... but it kinda calmed down or something... ...dunno... I guess this is about a guy... so...now this guy that totally broke me down is coming back to me... I really did love him, but I don't know what to do with it now... love, Virgin Suïcide...< !signature--> "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... [This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 09-05-2000).] |
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