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X_me_X
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since 2000-08-18

Posts 37

0 posted 2000-08-28 04:43 AM

Tears are a beautiful thing
for with every little drop they do bring
the releif that your heart may need
and help grieve the sad truth
that in the name of love it shall bleed

Tears are a beautiful thing
they can be the words your heart speaks although ur in silence
they can burst from the depth of the mirror to ur soul and they can begin the dance
the dance that they playfully enjoy on the dancefloor of your cheek and at the sound of you sigh
they cut the dance short and they will dry

as you wipe ur tears away
the sadness is wiped off your face and u pray
that the next time these lil dancers visit you
that they will be there to celebrate life going ur way

~All is forgiven but NEVER forgotten~

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-08-28 07:31 AM

Very beautiful thoughts and analogy X-Me-X! Welcome to Passions! Hope to read more from you ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-28 11:11 AM

This is such a great look at tears, very well done!

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-08-28 01:17 PM

x_me_x~~~I really like the way you described tears...to bad sometimes its for a bad thing that we cry though...good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

4 posted 2000-08-28 01:30 PM

Gee...I have never looked at tears in this way before, I have always seen them as being in the way, a sign of weakness, but you changed my view now.

Lovely poem, keep up the good stuff,

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets tr

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 2000-08-28 10:39 PM

"Tears are a beautiful thing
for with every little drop they do bring
the releif that your heart may need
and help grieve the sad truth
that in the name of love it shall bleed"-- Very true are your words. Wonderful work, welcome to Passions!

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

6 posted 2000-08-29 11:08 AM

wow.....the way you wrote this totally reminds me of Kahlil Gibran's work. Especially the last line....that was beautiful....i must agree with the rest. I've never seen tears in that poetic and truthful way. Very nicely writ

Salma

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