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Teen Poetry #3

The DO NOT's

Xeonox

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since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-08-27 10:47 PM

Do not cry for I cannot wipe these tears
Do not hope for I cannot cure yours fears,
Do not wish for I am no fairy,
Do not speak for your are unheard,
Do not risk for I am not your savior,
Do not pray for I will not answer,
Do not ask for you shall not receive,
Do not write for I am close for the night,
Do not love for I am a wingless dove.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-08-28 03:18 AM

i like this one...i have a couple of poems where i have repeated the same thing...like you did in the beginning of the sentence...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-28 10:49 AM

I like this one too, the repition works great. Thanks for sharing this!

Xeonox

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since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2000-08-28 04:31 PM

Erin and Lakewalker, I thank you for your comments. Thank you very much.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

4 posted 2000-08-29 11:34 AM

I must say this certainly was powerful. The repition sure was a nice one...keep writing!

Salma

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