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Teen Poetry #3

Just A Dream

Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-08-27 09:44 PM

When you look into their eyes
You fill up with wonderful sighs

They are in your dreams
And everytime you look at them your face just beams

Wishing you were in their arms
Knowing that they would protect you from any harm

When you wanna give them a hug
You turn away cause they'll think your a bug

They're in love, but it's not you
So how much you love them, they don't have a clue

If you and him had a chance
The relationship would surly dance

If the dancing did stop
Your heart would slowly drop

So if things don't work out
You'll know not to sit there and pout

Cause it's just a dream
You never know what it could mean

Within you I lose myself.
Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again.
-unkown-

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-08-27 10:49 PM

I loved each and every line of this poem. You have great talent.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-08-28 03:34 AM

"if you and him had a chance
this relationship would surly dance."

i like that line...it makes you think...well it makes me think of my past with someone...if we would have actually tried...maybe there would be something between us now...but its to bad for that guy in my past...cuz now i am happier then ever with my boyfriend...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-08-28 10:52 AM

I enjoyed reading this one, thanks for the chance to read it. I thought it was very well done

I really like the end

"Cause it's just a dream
You never know what it could mean"

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