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Teen Poetry #3

have you ever?

Joy
Junior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 10

0 posted 2000-08-24 02:17 AM

Have you ever thought you knew someone,
But then found out you don’t
Or thought you’d share your life with them,
And then decide you won’t?
Have you ever been betrayed by them,
Fed nothing but a lie
Then suddenly found out the truth,
And wished that you could die?
Have you ever felt nothing but hate
But loved at the same time?
If so,you can understand why
Adultery is a crime

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-24 02:23 AM

i like this a lot...such emotion, such words!
"Have you ever been betrayed by them,
Fed nothing but a lie"

keep writing!
Salma

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
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2 posted 2000-08-24 11:45 AM

Well yes I have and I happen to think that adultery is one of the worst crimes. But anyway, I agree with Salma on this one. Very strong emotions in this...well done.

Angel

Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns.

~*Guardian of Light*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-08-24 12:03 PM

good poem!!!you showed so much feeling...keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

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