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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
Here's a little poem i wrote quickly one day. I don't really care to share the details but have a read and see what you think. allow my heart to speek i wish to be washed clean the blood that stains me drains me without a care why can't you listen hear the words cried out! allow me to touch your ear with metephors of love's life let it sink in and stay there please remember me i beg you still i loathe that day and always will it'll never be the same but i pray you never forget me or ponder on what i lack because i'm leaving, and never coming back --Hoppy 6/20/00 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant "Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live." |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Hmm...this one relates to me in a way but I don't think it's quite the same as you. But anyway, great poem....I could feel the depth in it. Angel Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns. ~*Guardian of Light*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
"because im leaving, and never coming back"...i love it...that was a good line you used...keep up the good work...i cant wait to see more!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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