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Emmaline Junior Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 15 |
i hurt all over every last part of me aches it cries i cry my tears of anguish and frustration my emotions have taken over and run rampages over my body they weigh me down but diminish my insides i'm a mess inside my pain has run me over taken me hostage my loneliness has let loose all kinds of emotions that i'm not ready to deal with i'm lost in the familiar my halls are no longer the same there's no going back yet no looking forward because there is no forward the future is black and alone |
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sorrowfulangel Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 59Memphis,TN |
girlie...this poem strikes deep in me....right now I'm going through a lot of drama...with guys and such...and I think you put my feelings beautifully into words...thank you "god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
*~*Welcome to Passions*~*i hope that you enjoy it here just as much as i do...good poem...sounds like you are going through some tough stage right now...well keep up the good work...i hope to see more!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey Girlie!! Welcome to Passions!! Well written poem, a lot of emotion. I hope everything gets better, just keep your head up. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Welcome to Passions! Congrats on such a wonderful first post! We wanna see more... Salooma |
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Emmaline Junior Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 15 |
Thank you all for the comments. This was written a few months ago, during a hard spot in my life. But all is well now. Thank you for the concern, though. It's nice to know that even strangers can care in this world. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions This got my attention fast and held it all the way, it was great. I can't wait to read more of your poems!! |
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