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DC Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 13Arkansas |
You're on my mind You're everywhere I look But I can hardly see Because my eyes are filled with tears They slip down my cheek I wipe them away and Try to think of the future When we will be together again DC |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Ahah! i thought so! i had to go look thru the arcives, but i knew it was you...did ya disappers on us? hehe love the poem  Tamma If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is very good work here, thanks for sharing it Can't wait to read more! |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
great poem and I think you did a great job. I hope to read more. Keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
I feel that way, minus the tears, basically everyday i'm without my partner. This was nicely written "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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DC Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 13Arkansas |
Thanx ya'll for the support... I wrote that last year when my bf and I had some problems... Now everything is great for us though! And yes, i was gone for TOO long! sorry... but i do have lots of poems to share with ya'll!!!lata, desiree |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I can totally get what you're saying in this poem. I've felt like this before, oh yeah. Really good writing! Peace. *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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