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Lovely Fragments |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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Well...I know it's doesn't rhyme...but we all know that poetry doesn't have to ryhme...anyways, read on. < !signature-->Lovely Fragments Oh, blessed past. These shattered pieces about me resemble lovely things. Oh, blessed days. What of beauty could these be... broken as they are?! Broked, bleeding bits.. yet they seem so meant to fit. Were they once a love? Speak the truth to me. My heart and her's once seemed to fit as these lovely fragments. Jeremy Halstead 8-17-00 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." [This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Jeremy; this exquisite poem of love lost, is called "free verse". You did a magnifivent job, it flows like a dream. ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Lovely poem....I would have loved it to be a bit longer though....I was si into it already. Great writing As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very nicely done, I really enjoyed this. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Well lol i really dont know what to say. You amaze me more everytime i read a new poem!  Keep up the great work~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jeremy, Nice to see you expanding your horizons. This was a beautiful piece. Very descriptive and picturesque. Thomas |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wonderful poem jeremy as always....doesn't have to rhyme as long it comes from your heart which obviously this did....beautiful work, maybe you shouldn't rhyme more often. Salooma |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Once yet again, you have captured my heart and every corresponding part. You have such an outstanding talent here, I wish that this too I could bare. But instead I shall take advantage of the limited talent I have, And do my best to do what I can. Keep it up my dear! Miss ya! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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