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Touches Remembered
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Touches Remembered |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
I guess you've noticed The way I linger on your touch. I shouldn't, we're finished, although I don't want to believe that. But when our touch meets, My hands are taken by force, The glimmer of hope in my heart And the memory of your lost touch Overthrow my sensibilities. My hands remember My fingers remember And try to reclaim your embrace. I guess you've noticed The way I linger on your touch. I can't help it, my hand remembers The love and comfort that your hand provides. I have to fight to stop myself. But afterwards, the light in my heart asks; "Did she feel the same?" And I wonder if you wanted to take my hand, Just as I wanted to take yours. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
These are great romantic thoughts that you've so wonderfully put into words. I really like the end: But afterwards, the light in my heart asks; "Did she feel the same?" And I wonder if you wanted to take my hand, Just as I wanted to take yours |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
oh gosh...this is sweet! to think it's only a touch and you've developed it into a beautiful poem. it's also nice to think that guys do feel like we do...as you said, "linger on a touch.." very nicely writ! salooma |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
that was really sweet hun. -jessica- |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It never really sinks into my mind how good you guys are. I'm always amazed at the things i read in passions. Keep up the good work As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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