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sorrowfulangel Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 59Memphis,TN |
i can't seem to remember a time when you didn't belong to her but as i've come to notice things can change ever so quickly a foggy memory drifting in my thoughts myself wrapped in the comfort of your arms something i never thought to be seemed so natural under a night's sky no more does she light up your days and i know your heart still feels the pain to know why you turned to me might help me forget this guilty memory i know it's not the greatest.....but it does come straight from my heart..... "god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Straight from the heart can be the best kind  Nice poem! |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
I'm sorry I missed this my Queen, I know how much this has been bothering you. Keep your head up EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Sorrow~~~Just remember the best poems are the ones that come straight from your heart...And you wrote it beautifully!!!Keep it up... ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
well this was really written with pure emotion so you wrote a beautiful poem.. Now night arrives with her purple legions Retire now to your tents & to your dreams Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth I want to be ready. - JM |
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