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All my life i've waited..........
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All my life i've waited.......... |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
All my life I've waited For ssomeone like you A true and honest friend Always there to see me through If ever I'm sad and lonley You wipe away my tears And whenever I'm frightened You chase away all my fears You taught me how to love You showed me how to care You found a place inside me I never even knew was there You made me smile and laugh again You gave me a new start For all that you have given me I now will give you my heart p.s. This poem is written to Chirs my bofriend!! I have just discovered that he cares for me the same as i do him!! I knew he'd come around and love me just the same!! Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
What a great poem! I loved the message and the flow of it. I hope everything works out great  |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Sounds great, wish the best for ya, thats cool, i think u gotta be friends first, youll prolly make a great couple, great poem and i hope the best for ya love, jeremydraul |
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lupigirl Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19Mequon, Wisconsin |
Congrats on finding something that will make you so happy. I cannot tell you how much your poem spoke to me... it's the way love should feel... I loved this poem! Keep up the good work and  SMILE!!!"You've gotta SING like nobody's listening, DANCE like nobody's watching, and LOVE like it's never gonna hurt!!" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such beautiful sentiments about friendship and love ChrisLover! Very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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thug-a-licious Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 27 |
Wow this is such a great poem. It's always better to be friends first, because that way your relationship has something to build from. The people who were firends before lovers are Usually closer to each other than the ones who don't. Keep up the good work and i hope everything goes well for u!!!!!!! |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Beautiful, dahling! I really liked it. Love is so.......complicated. But anyway, good writing. Peace out! *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Such beautiful words...it's so wonderful when you discover that someone loves you. Exellent work, keep it up! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
hey guys i just wanted to thank you for all the wonderful replies!! i am happier than ever...a nd you h=guys are rigth it i better to be friend first.. we have so many good memories to look back on and that s what makes our relationship so muchmore! love always, janetteEverything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
You are so lucky to have someone like this in your life. You describe it well. Keep up the good work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Janette I can't begin to tell you how very happy I am for you. I hated the long hours we spent talking about how much we were hurting because of your chris and how he hurt you and because of my chris and how he hurt me. I'm so glad that you're pain has finally come to a stop! You guys go so good together! I hope so much that everything works out for you two!! Best of luck...and don't forget to call me!! hehe Love ya Girl!! *hugs and kisses* Love Always~*~PryncessJess~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good luck with the guy. It's always refreshing to find a decent man nowadays! Jenn |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
good poem!!!you made me smile...i give you props for this poem...i wish you the best of luck with him!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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GodsPerfktAngel Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28Ohio |
suhweet lil ppoem ! I hope you give these to your b/f I think he would tottally drop his jaw b/c of the feelings you have for him!!! nice Job Jocelyn M. Cosgray ~*you cannot hold back a laugh any more than you can a tide,both are forces of nature*~ |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
hey guys well godsperfktangel i did give this poem to my boyfriend and i think he wa shocked!!but at the same time we were both happy!! so its working oout great!!thanks jess for caring o much give me a call too k?? and umm for all the other repiers thanks for caring and writting me back!! love janette Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
better late than never right?? great poem! seems like your love is here to stay and i hope it does. salooma |
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