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Teen Poetry #3

Tired Of It

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-11 03:54 PM

Iam tired of feeling this way
Iam tired of feeling the guilt of your mistakes
Iam tired of hurting becaue of you
Iam tired of hurting because I love you

We never thought that this could happen
We never imaged the feeling of such distrust
We never predicted that that it wouldn't last
We never thought about our past

I never thought you can deceive me so
I never thought I could let you go
I never realized that we were both a fault
I never realized that I was blamed for it all

Now I realize that it was you who was at fault
Now I realize it was you who gave up on us
Now I realize it was you who gave up on me
Now I realize that it was all up to you

[This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 08-11-2000).]

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-08-11 11:39 PM

I am glad that you were able to get through the guilt you were feeling. One thing I want you to know though. There doesn't have to be someone to blame when things don't work out. Sometimes they just don't work out and we should walk away feeling happy that we were not stuck in something that was wrong for us. Blame and guilt are powerful emotions that hurt us more then they help us.

When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep;

How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face...

William Butler Yeats

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

2 posted 2000-08-11 11:45 PM

Good poem, I hope it helped you relieve emotions, its always good to let it all out, good form, keep it up.

,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,

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