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GodsPerfktAngel Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28Ohio |
I was finally getting over you Believing we were over and through I even had crushes on othen guys than you I was walking wiht my head held high thinkin I wasnt going to fall Then you had to smile at me and go and ruin it all |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
I know how that feels, I have been going thru the same thing lately, well great poem! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
That poem was short but yet so sweet. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. -jessica- |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
This rings loud and true, my friend. "Why do your glances seem like advances?" It's a shame that only one person's smile can do this to me, I'd like to feel like this all the time... |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
OH this is soooo something i relate to! This happens to me all the time. I just brokeup with someone awhile ago. And everytime i see them and they flash me that smile i just want to curl up and die. It hurts so much sometimes. Now i find myself avoiding anything or any place that i might see them so i wont be thrown into a flashback. but neways! lol great poem..keep up the great work ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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CharliesBaby New Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 2 |
Hey, good poem! I know one that is QUITE SIMILAR to this one! HAHAHAHA! Love ya, CharliesBaby |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is said so well, very good work  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
hey good poem...doesnt it just suck when stuff like this happens!!!keep up the good work... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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