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The 1st Kiss
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The 1st Kiss |
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Fairy Princess Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64Fitchburg Ma, USA |
First we are messin' around, Then I laugh at you cause your funny, You laugh at me......... I say be right back got a call, You follow me and say who is it, I smile at you and say my sister....... After I go in my room and look at picture, Of my dad who's passed away I have tears, You say aww Minna then I want to go for a walk... As we a outside you hold my hands, I smile but not a happy smile, You feel bad cause you love me.. Now I say I want to go home Dave, You say "I know", Then we go back... I say I'm cold, You say okay come here, I'm in your arms. I look into your eyes, You look into my eyes, We both smile........ Then you start touching my face, I start smiling so you say move closer, So I do................ You start touching my lips Then we kiss I hug you, After we back away I say.. I love you Dave, You say Minna I love you too, Thanks Dave for understanding me Dave.. Love always ~*~Minna~*~  ************************************************* Peeps ya know how we broke up well he asked me out. He said he was sorry for what he did and he said it was wrong how he treated me........ Keep hope in you, Keep, dreams in you, And you'll be fine - Unknown |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
What a nice recreation of a great moment in your life  Keep up the great poetry! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
hey...wow how sweet that moment must have been, you definatly did a great job of forming that simple kiss into a grand poem. very beautiful...keep it up  salooma |
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