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The shot of a gun
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The shot of a gun |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
The sound of a gun going off is louder then being stabbed with a knife When that gun went off it ended my life Everyday I ask myself why I had to live my life the wrong way Now my only wish is that I could live just one more day Just so I can say goodbye to my family and friends But how was I supposed to know my life would just sudenly end If I could have said one last thing it would have to be Everyone out there turn your life around now before you end up like me! By, Lauren |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like the message here, about people turning their live around. Good work! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great message you give in this poem, I wish more ppl listened to it! Good luck and spread this out, I think we'll benifit  Salooma |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Thankyou to the 2 people who actually responded.But that's pretty sad only 2 responces. Lauren |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Thats a really good poem, I really enjoyed that, and the message is real good, I mean it is definitely true that we can not take life for granted. -jessica- |
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