Teen Poetry #3 |
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The true beauty is within us... |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
The true beauty is within us... Fame meets beauty... And only few will see... That the beauty that covers lies within thee... The beauty that lays within us will meet our goals... For our appearance is only the beauty of our souls... The true beauty is within us... By Jessica DeMaio |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What beautiful thoughts Jessica ... just lovely! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
short but has a great message. Keep it up As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi SweetPoet, This is wonderful, insightful and full of wisdom, so very much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very beautiful....and so true, i love this! salooma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
What a beauty of a poem! ![]() |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
The beauty was definately within your mind and heart when you wrote that...nice work. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Thank you everyone. ![]() |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Hey great poem I love the flow of it keep up the awesome work talk to you later. ![]() |
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