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O Lover Of Mine
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O Lover Of Mine |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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O lover of mine You make me smile Make me sing Skip with joy. O lover of mine I feel you Around me Inside me Deeper and deeper In my soul. O lover of mine I hear you Whispering Your endearments In my ear. O lover of mine Desire, ecstasy Creeping into me My mind, my body. O lover of mine I need you, want you Heart racing Sweat glistening On your body, so fine. O lover of mine Higher and higher We fly Into the sky Into each other. O lover of mine The morning is here I awake The dream flees Goodbye O lover of mine. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
taramw, really enjoyed reading this peom. The expression conveyed the joy of a special lover, and then, to find its only a dream.. aren't most lovers? ~~nice writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
yes I've had this dream. you to?? huh? I want to sleep forever sometimes. great job on the dream kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
So real and intense, and then in a moment it's gone. Very nice! I too, have had such dreams (not only when I was asleep!  ). Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This poem took me up, up, up, up, up,......then doooowwwnnn....so quickly. Bummer it's just a dream 'eh? Well written. Neat read. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 06-17-2000).] |
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hunter Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 22lex,ky |
would love to have more dreams like that most would i guess.good writting |
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tac Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28New Jersey |
I long to sleep again so that I may dream of my sweet love never to awaken again... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Enjoyed this much ! |
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