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Voices.....
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Voices..... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Do you hear the voices Calling out your name They never scream or shout It's always about the same They want you to bow to them And whisper in their ears Tell them of your sins And all about your fears They feed upon your souls Of all your sinful fright All they want is nourishment Thats all they have in sight Feed them if you want to Just remember what they say... Everything comes back three times three It happens each and every day Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW...so many ways to read this one. Are they MY voices? Other voices? Inside..outside? Lovers...others? Nice job. Hardrock |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Great Job dark kisses I really love this one blue |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Once again...lovely. You truly have the gift of words. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I get the feeling of anothers voice influencing our thoughts..Listening to our voice..I may be wrong, but very nice work DKW, enjoyed very much!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I know the selfishness of the "come to me and I'll make all the pain go away!!" All "they" want is what little I have.... Maybe I missed it, but this is what it says to me. Thanks!! I like it!< !signature--> Click [This message has been edited by Click (edited 07-23-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, "all they want is nourishment". Nicely scary, to think that they are after you, and very greedy. Cat... |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
DKW, Nicely done. The voices... hummm, this could be almost anything,like HR said. A nice allure to let the readers imagination rome. LarBear |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
sad thing is we all need nourishment and it takes so many forms... nicely written Maureen |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
wonderful poem all the other replies have said exactly what i was going to say. nicely done! |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
this is great...as far as listening to the voices, I just swat at them like flies.  EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Big Bear New Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 2 |
i like it how you live it up to the reader to find out what kind of voices they are. good job |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Terrific! Enjoyed this one of yours very much |
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