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Where does this end? |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Crossing deadly traps, Scum to the ghastly voice, Sharpening remaining senses, Printing a puddle pathway, Glancing at the shrieking sound, Staring skyward momentarily, Scrolling passing shadows, Ringing silence of radiance, Inspecting each era, Freeing the cages, Where does this end? Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Cool visual!!! Thanks! Click |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I thought I would write something with realling no bouncing around, Know what I mean? Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Xeonox! I dunno if i have read your poem correctly, but it seems to have a rather staggered feel and i think it adds to the edginess of the poem. The image that struck me was that of a laboratory ... dunno if i am wrong. Anyway, i think the poem is pretty cool. =) ~verve |
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