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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Photoplay Sometimes, in the darkened theater behind my closed eyes, I don’t know whether to laugh or to cry at the madness playing across the screen again and again. One becomes accustomed to almost anything I guess. The unfulfilled need, increasing in intensity, finally becoming a craving for something unattainable. One priceless moment. No... The word echoes. (Push) Just lie back and watch the movie as ice forms inside the room quenching the fires within. The cold lulls me to sleep. I’ve never seen the entire movie. I wonder how it ends? 7/21/00 "Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Jonas...Awesome!! Wow...what imagery..what power!! This is the first I have read of yours....but it will certainly not be the last. Hardrock |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is great! I'm a movie buff and I read enthralled at your image of sitting in the theater.  |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I agree, this is excellent and hope to for many more!!!! Great work The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Neat-o! Great poem. Questions the whole point of mindless entertainment. Great job! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh,...how very cool. Hi there Jonas. Well written work, you had me in there the whole time. Take care. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you for reading everyone! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, Jonas, great poem. Lets have more.. Catalinamoon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Jonas...a very thoughtful write..btw I love Poe...and went to a wedding reception in his tomb at the church where he is buried... ~~smiling at the thought Maureen |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
great poem!! it gave me a picture in my head the whole time!! i look forward to reading more by you!! |
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