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Tethered...Soliloquy
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Tethered...Soliloquy |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Wondering why my timing is so poor... Is fate intervening drawing from me This constant yearning, a cancer spreading? Listening to sounds of heaven's release, Thunderous, as these tears trickling down Join those I watch on the misted windows. Increasing day by day, my emptiness Until this morn, when it rained upon me, Thinking how every moment of feeling Pains me in pleasure, in want, need of you To reach into your heart and allow them, The words needed, to quell my "explosive", Emotions, that clamor to rhythm heard, As each bolt strikes and the seconds follow. Why I ask? Why is it that I rely On others to gift upon me rainbows, To color my world in shades of loving, Removing the grayness that tethers me To this negative world where I reside? I am corrupted by these pleasure thoughts Wondering, waiting, for time's replacement Of my pains to pleasure, releasing me. M |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
We all have our pleasure which we sometimes despite for they have rare occurnces. Good poem. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
If I get what your talking about, I really empathize. It was a great poem! |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Oh yes, I remember those feelings now, I had forgotten. Feeling hardly alive at all as I sat waiting for a call, looking out the window at the rain, empty inside. Feeling it wasn't right that my whole world depended on what someone else did. But helpless. Beautifully crafted Moonchild. Thanks for bringing back the memory of those moments... Allan  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Xeonox, Mage beast...thank you for your words allan..you must either be inside my heart or mind..as you pegged it correctly..it was pouring when I wrote this..thundering and lightning and I wondered why it is I feel the need to depend on others for what should and once came out of me and me only to result in happiness. ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Maureen...You painted such a beautiful portrait of your soul...and you shared it with us. How wonderful!! Hardrock |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Hardrock ...this was my wonderful chance..how often does one get a challenge to talk to themselves without someone thinking they are of another mind...* ~~soft thanks Maureen *wink...I do it all the time..just this time I was asked to *s |
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