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the longing..... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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I taste your blood upon my lips I savor the warmth of your years I no longer feel your heart My eyes are full of tears Longing for you to enter To become just one with me To ravish my body slowly And do what needs to be Just dont take my soul in vain Leave it as it lies I have worked many years on it And not ready to say my good-byes Hmmmm I am unsure about this one. One of them "who really knows" poems!  Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I am sure....it is lovely!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like it too. "Just don't take my soul in vain" Great line. Cat.. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW...O m'sweet lady...maybe because Affy got me in a Goth mood...but this, to me, is dark. It reeks of Dracula. This is one of your best..of this nature of course. Excellent!! Hardrock |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~DkW,...good,good,good one!!! Yes! I agree with the others. Well written longing and great lines in this. Great wording. Be well D. *Peace. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Well I like it! Really well done! One can feel the passion! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well done dark_kisses_ within been a long while since I read you... but this poem is awesome. Avanti p.s. I love the signature If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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