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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
I am not blind, but I cannot see. My dreams are lined with reality. Though all too often they are scorned, I cannot say I wasn't warned. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Chibi...this is so cool!! Just the right words, in just the right format. I really like this. Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Perfect!!! (the only word I could find for this poem) So little words yet such BIG meaning. Loved it!!  Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh boy is this good. i can not even think of words to reply with. you have taken them from me with the poem you have shared. thank you. excellent. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
Seems I always wish I hadn't been warned so I'd have an excuse. These words spoke to me very well. Went strait to my heart. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Ace! (I had to dig up a new superlative, and that one came to mind first) This is goodgOOdgood. A sad thing it is that we sometimes have to make our own mistakes to learn from them, but that's life, I suppose! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Excellent! I love the punch at the end. "Every great century that produces art is, so far, an artificial century, and the work that seems the most natural and simple of its time is always th |
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