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Home-built Woman
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Home-built Woman |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA 
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Home-built Woman I wonder where I’d go to find, A basic building plan On how to build a woman? I really think I can. I’ve looked in all the magazines, Like Playboy and the rest. But they’re not real, and, what I want Has got to be the best. I’ll make a list of all I need, Assemble all the parts. I’ll put them all together, Then see what happens when she starts. I’ll give her hair of shiny red, Or black, or blonde or brown. A pixie nose, with tip turned up, Or one with tip turned down. She’ll have eyes of emerald green, Or grey, or brown, or blue. Color’s not important, As long as she has two. She’ll have skin of milky white, Or mocha, brown or black. It’s what’s inside that really counts, I’ll just take something off the rack. I’ll pick two breasts, petite and small, Or maybe big and round. Or something in-between size, Whatever can be found. I’ll give her curves around the hips, Or maybe make her fatter. Or slim her down like Ally McBeal, It really doesn’t matter. She’ll have two hands, soft and small, Or calloused, big and sore. As long as they’re attached to her arms, I’ll take what’s at the store. Two long legs, with shapeley calves, Or short and slightly bowed. They’re just used for locomotion, And hardly ever showed. (yeah, I know it’s bad grammar) Inside I’ll pack a great big heart, Leaving no more room. I’ll insulate the space with love, To keep out all the gloom. She’ll have no use for tear ducts, And she won’t need a brain. ‘Cause I’ll fill her head with happiness, To keep out all the pain. Now I’ll put her all together, With help from God above. Then fill her life with sunshine, Red roses and my love. |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Bad grammar or not Hardrock, it's great. Very down to earth and from the heart. Good luck my friend! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
This is the sweetest thing......if I could biuld a woman I would ship her to you , overnight express... with shinny red hair and purple velvet dress. Eyes of grey to gaze upon only you and stay. Small in stature large in eccentric nature with love, patience, and understanding in abundance... that would be the perfect gift (from me to you) to a sweet, gentle man of your elequence!! P>S> yes, I have red hair......**smiles big** your admireror......hehhee "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
p.s.s. I forgot, I wrote another poem today that would have gone with this one well, but I will have to wait until tomarrow to post or I will be over my 2 in 24hours limit. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
OK, this green-eyed woman says you are the creator!! This speaks acceptance,so down to earth, talks about the "real" stuff that counts!! Excellent job Hardrock...Your ability for unconditional love shines through!! Just loved it.. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Awwwwwwww! *sigh* Thats a sweet poem! (They don't happen to sell a kit that makes guys do they?) -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
OK, now all the women at DP are lined up, loving you. What a great poem, and so perfect to warm any woman's heart. S |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
hey my friend you forgot to put wings on one. haha like I did, and I found her, god what a woman. I'll post her picture after we get married in August, at sparks. later. HHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWLLLLLLLLLLLLLL Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
My sentiments given verse...wonderfully done. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Oh Marvin, You really are fantastic! Wouldn't we all be in bliss to have a man like you!!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
And out of darkness comes... temptation. Had to smile... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwww now wouldnt this make life a little easier. To build the your own soulmate. (sighs) Nicely done Marv!! Gotta love how your mind works! Peace DkW Oh also.... thanx for the imput on "Understanding Death". Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I had no idea your name was Marv. Well that is good to know. You write poems of every day things with a touch of magical fiction. I always look forward to your comments on my poems because reading your poems gives me inspiration. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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meara Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 15 |
That is an amazing poem. I truly am impressed. It's just too bad that there is not more men out there that think like you. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done Hardrock. Accolades for even tackling that piece. jwesley |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is another great one from you my friend. and please if you ever get those plans send them my way. so i can build a girl to. enjoyed this wonderful piece alot keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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