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I Sit Alone"reply to the other one please
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I Sit Alone"reply to the other one please |
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LarBear01 New Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 2 |
All, Well for some strange reason, I no longer have the right password for my orginal name LarBear. I have to start all over again, with this name LarBear01. What a pain. Anyway Here is my very first post as LarBear01: I Sit Alone I Sit alone though the night Wanting so badly to hold you tight Yearning to feel your body so close Bundled emotions I can’t expose Stars glow deep in the sky I sit alone and start to cry Tear by tear I try to hide Writing my heart out, I have tried My poems with much meaning My heart careening I remember the romance so strong A love, that may be wrong I sit alone, my soul in agony Is this love a tragedy? I miss you so dearly My love poured out so clearly Longing for your romance Desire for your chance I sit alone, in torment Our hearts dissent Looking to the heavens for the answers This love has a growing cancer Dangerous you once said This cancer has spread Darkened my soul Your love has took its toll Once things were better Once I thought forever I sit alone, bleeding from within My love for you has worn too thin I hope your future is bright Without me in your sights I need better than this This love a complete abyss July 18, 2000 Please reply to my orginal name: LarBear... It was fixed right after I posted this one. Thanks (-: [This message has been edited by LarBear01 (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
LarBear...sometimes some love just isn't meant to be. But it still hurts to give it up. Well stated emotions here. Hardrock PS...Tried to send you e-mail but you addy isn't working. Check and correct if necessary please.  ) |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
A dying relationship hurts to the core. Been there. Hope You can mend and find happiness soon.Be good to You. ~Sash~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I know, Lar, sitting alone thinking about it, things can look pretty bleak. Great poem, you put all your heart into it. Take care. Cat... "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Lar, grieve for a while then go on. You deserve the best. kethry. When dark of night takes your soul Think of me and be made whole. |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Lar, grieve for a while then go on. You deserve the best.I particularly like the last two lines kethry. When dark of night takes your soul Think of me and be made whole. |
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