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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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BROKEN ANGEL Broken angel cannot fly Broken wings made the angel cry Sitting lonely all day The little angel will surely die The room is cold and dark as hell The angel is not feeling well Starving to death The little angel will disappear before anyone can tell Lonely she should be Now the little angel starts to pray; -Why did you leave me? -Oh father you promised you would stay! The little angel closes her eye Now her face is oh so dry All her pain she kept inside But now the little angel stops to cry Six feet in the ground she'll hide Though her soul will surely fly |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
*sniff* The poor little angel! A beautiful poem!!! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
That sounds so familiar...*sigh* Very powerful....full of emotion and depth. The last part of it was my favorite...it just really hit me. Lovin' it.  Take care my friend...Yours truly, Angel By the way...thanks for replying to my poems.  I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ohhh.... wonderful poem |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
lovely. truly lovly. broken angel is my nickname so i had to read this. i know how this angel feels. i am an angel whos wings are broken and my never fly again. see my ex-girlfriend called me her night angel. then she broke my heart. now i am a broken angel. great work my friend. from one broken angel to another. *hugs* we got to stick together. Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Kethry comes up and gives you a big hug *hugs*. Wonderful poem. kethry. When dark of night takes your soul Think of me and be made whole. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I can picture a little blond headed sweet faced angel.....but then again, i could be a bit odd.....hehhe I really enjoyed this. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Beautiful...absolutely Beautiful. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Thank you all for your replies, glad you liked it Jesse Jaymz(Broken Angel)~ I'm touched by your kind words, though sad to hear that you know how it feels to be a "Broken Angel". Got to stick together my friend D.E~It means a great deal to me that you liked it, thanks for caring  Your friend ~Broken~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The broken angel shall again have her wings and happiness, for God does indeed look after the 'special ones'. She must have faith and hope for a brighter tomorrow. Great analagies here hon!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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