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You May Be Gone
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You May Be Gone |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
You may be gone Yet when I look past.. Desolation I get lost in your eyes You may be gone Yet your footprints.. Still Tap dance on my heart You may be gone Yet sometimes.. I can still feel the breeze Bringing in your scent |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
It's rare that a poem touches my hard heart, but this one did. It left a footprint there. Thanks, Deb. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
"I get lost in your eyes". Yes, I can feel that poem very strongly. Gone but still there in so many ways. Beautifully written. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
very nice hun *hugs* this also touched my heart as it has hardrock and cat. keep writing. i love this one. Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Memories of the past are hard to erase sometimes. You have describe what I feel from time to time about my ex. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
What a beautiful poem! Memories are with us always. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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