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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I embrace you I twist around you I smother you Strangle you Stifle you I can‘t just caress you I have to ingest you I must possess you Through And Through Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I absolutally love this one!! Pleasure in pain.....such bliss... glad to know that I am not the only who lives by this. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Fierce words. It's an overwhelming feeling, I know it well. I would say you expressed it perfectly "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow!!!! this is extremely powerful. what a great poem this is!! well done, lothie. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta...having a good day were we, when we wrote this one? "Wow" is not enough. "Smashing" is too Brit. "Magnifique" is too French. Oh what the heck, in any language it's just GREAT!!! Hardrock |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I belive "perfect" is a word whitch describes this poem well.... -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Ohhhh so wonderful! "I just can't caress you / I have to ingest you..." This brings so much to mind. Once again, loth, superb. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Cat, Kynder, Wren, Portia, Thanks!  a-ali, the poem wasn't about me, it was born of the imagination (see below). I am really glad you can relate, though, because that means it's realistic!! Hardrock, Good day? LOL! I wrote it on the bus  after spotting some ivy twisting around a beautifully painted iron fence, so harmonious. And it grew from there ...Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ivy?!!! LOL - Fantastic!!!! |
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