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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

0 posted 2000-07-17 10:43 AM

(this was written in 1998, but I thought I would dig into my older ones today. Hope you enjoy!)

IN MY NIGHTS.

You are timeless, ageless,
a sweet whipser in midnights' bliss.
You are fine linen edged with eliquent lace.
A breath of freshness to my dusty place.
You are tart strawberry wine.
A mysterious cold, mist so fine.
You are my breath as my soul ages.
A wonderous chapter as I turn the pages.
You are the cool evening mist.
A black rose with a drop of dew, kissed.
You are my lone visitor in the night.
A welcomed sight.
You are the cold evening rain.
A pleasurable pain.
You are soft , deep, blood-red velvet.
A peace with in my torment.
You are the comfort in my night.
A gohstly plight...to leave befor my dawn on the wings of ravens in
flight.< !signature-->

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-17 11:24 AM

~Hooray for A!!! I am very pleased that you dug this one out. Glad to have gotten the chance to read it. It reads beautifully...just so smooth and well said. Truly a super poem. Be well A. *Peace.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-07-17 01:13 PM

I second that! Just beautiful.

Dedreia
Member

since 2000-07-10

Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

3 posted 2000-07-17 01:33 PM

I vote yes too...very good! Bring on some more of that old stuff. Dee

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

4 posted 2000-07-17 06:54 PM

Oh so vivid and beautiful!!! Thanks for bringing this one to us, I loved it!!!

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

5 posted 2000-07-18 01:48 PM

I love the imagery ... Kinda gothic in a way.
I would really love to read more of your works!

verve~

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

6 posted 2000-07-18 03:11 PM

Very, very nice. I particularly enjoyed "You are the comfort in my night"

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

7 posted 2000-07-18 04:18 PM

Ditto, ditto, ditto, ditto....very nice work, A'. Hardrock

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