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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
An hour passed And then three more And I remained To not heal But scar To that place Which awaits for me If this fray I shall fail Because you uttered I would You dared Take a chance To stab me Which I wholy Want to revert These intentions Which you cast on me Will become me If you pursue To scar me An invisible bruise On my feelings Of worthlessness Which you pressed on me Unkindly Cruely Unyielding Severely Bruetly Scarred a thought on my soul To die |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This feels so sad. I hope you are ok. Very touching poem. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Kari...I feel the anger here, and the hurt. Nice expression of your pain. You have friends here..we will help you through it. Hardrock |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
The one word lines worked great with this subject matter. I like your form quite a bit. Very powerful, keep it up!  -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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