Hell and Time, two more Greek Gods ...

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Dark Poetry #2

Hell and Time, two more Greek Gods ...

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-07-16 06:44 AM

two poems, no. one about Time and no. two about Hell (if they were Gods)

chronos

elsewhere time waits
insane
for the last sun
to end

Hell

consumed by dreams
Hades laughs
wishing he found
an end
to his blood
stained night

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Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-07-16 10:08 AM

I'm not sure what to say here, very dark and interesting, "time waits, insane", that felt just about right to me. Powerful.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-07-16 11:48 PM

~Your words are 'consuming'. So cold. So direct. Well written duo here. Be well. *Peace.

DeathTrippy
Junior Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 45
WY USA

3 posted 2000-07-16 11:53 PM

very cold yet still hell.

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

4 posted 2000-07-17 08:39 AM

Visions of darkness...and eternity. Powerful images, Uta. Hardrock

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-07-17 01:07 PM

this is a very good poem i always enjoy reading your work and i like this type more because all the different gods amaze me. so do keep it up my friend.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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