Dark Poetry #2 |
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Hate Me! |
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FJiznit Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24 |
What will it take to make you hate me? Hmmm. Let me see... All you've built, I'll bring crashing down You may stand tall, but I'll cut you down I'll steal your love and break your heart Set about tearing your world apart Gonna taint your name and poison your blood Make your life a lie in a hole of mistrust Take all that you have and burn it away Smite your face of love with my fist of hate Damn right I'm a ******* All I do is wrong Watch me ruin your life Then hate me... That's what I want... I'll make you taste my insane lust Grind you down 'til you taste the dust A whole world of pain rising up for you So I'll open the door and push you through Damn right I'm a ******* All I do is wrong Watch me ruin your life Then hate me... That's what I want... Take my hand of friendship, the hand of an enemy I don't care what you think of me It's my ambition to bring you down I wont rest 'til I steal your crown Damn right I'm a ******* All I do is wrong Watch me ruin your life Then hate me... That's what I want... Hate makes me what I am... |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hmm, that was a little bit hostile...Tell me, are you referring to a specific entity, which is hate, or are you trying to make something or someone hate you. I notice I'm a little dense today, too bad I was the first response. I liked the poem very much, and the feeling it conveyed to me, was more of someone trying very hard to turn someone away. Powerful writing, either way.. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Uh,...powerful writing indeed. Lots of strength behind these well written words. Lots of direction and opposition too. Be well. *Peace. |
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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
Interesting view. Powerful revultion at work here. Guess I'm not the only anti-social here. Is this directed at somebody in particular or at the world? |
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FJiznit Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24 |
LOL. This ain't about me. Maybe I've been listening to too much Nick Cave. Heh heh. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
What an unpleasant person you have written about here. I like to write about that type too ![]() Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Good Grief!! Make me have nightmares now ![]() ![]() Nice to see ya again too. Missed chatting with ya ![]() Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Whatever happened to "just say no"? Nice poem...lots of hostility here. Sometimes some people just won't accept "No" for an answer....more extreme measures are called for. But...I dunno...I couldn't do that. Hardrock |
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