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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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HOLLOW Can you see into my soul? Can you read into my eyes? Can you see under my skin, & see who I really am? All of this is hopeless. Life's no longer worth living. It's the point where everyday is cloudy, & pain is all I feel. Where death would be a welcum guest. Emptiness surrounds me. Is sleep as bad as waking? Haunting visions in my subconscious. My only relief is to give myself, to the eternal darkness. Help me find someone who really cares. Help me find peace without death. Lead me to the light, & put a smile on my face. ~In our attempt to cope with early situations, we chose a passive position.~ LOVE ELMO  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Elmo, I hope you are happier now. This is very touching, and sad, and expressive of that hopeless feeling we can all struggle with. |
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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
Very hopeless feeling conveyed here. I like the ending although to me it makes it even more helpless. If nobody cares who will help you find somebody who does care? That is just my view though, and I'm glad your feeling happier at the end than at the beginning of this. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awww thanx i did find some1 actually who gets me through the tougher dayz LOVE ELMO |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"Help me find peace without death"...this line speaks to me...and many others I'm sure. Good stuff, Elmo. Hardrock |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx All!!! "Inside I'm hurting, even though my eyes are dry. If you let a tear roll down your cheek, don't mean you're weak, just means you're strong enough to cry"  LOVE ELMO |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh Elmo, don't ever give up, there is always someone who cares..we care her at DP, don't forget that!!! Hope your doing ok, a very moving poem!!! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~After reading this poem I am glad to learn that you have found someone to help you through. Sad yet well written expression. Be well E. *Peace. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yes I really do feel welcomed here & i plan to stay for a very long time thanx every1 Yes if it weren't for my boyfriend i probably wouldn't be here today he showed me everything that i have going for me & he showed me millions of reasons to stay LOVE ELMO |
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