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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Who has my soul < !signature-->Could it be you No not you Can you help me Someone stole it I am not crazy It was there at one time I don't remember when though Trust me When I see I will know Know who stole my soul What is that A mirror You want me to look It can not be The one in the mirror But it could be no other The one who took my soul There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed [This message has been edited by baerlon (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Ahhhhhhhhh do I know this feeling so well. Hell I deny just about everything that I am accused of  But seriously this is one heck of a poem. I enjoyed it alot!! And yes I do know what ya mean in it !Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This one is brilliant!!! I wish I had written it! I am jealous!! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Thank you both, i been gone awhile, and just need to write. Alot has changed since with plenty of new faces. I look foward to reading yours in the future. ps what if this book thingy? There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very thought provoking and well written. Loved it. Catalinamoon "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow,...seems as if this just poured itself right out of you. Awesome expression. Be well. *Peace. |
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