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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Clasp hard oh faithless one to the small perimeter of your being. Cling fast to your shallow beliefs Without caring, without seeing. Never let your heart be reached by a kind and open soul. Never feel love, taste love, try love... Never become whole. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sash, this is simply perfect. I have felt that many times, wish I could have dared to say it to them.. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
beautiful...I'm quickly becoming a fan...can't wait for your next post! EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Well said, I have lived on both sides. thanx! Click |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I keep coming back to this one.....I don't know why other than it rings true!! Click |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This one is brilliant and I love it!!!! There are so many people in our society who are too selfish to love (since that involves sharing) but in the end they just remain profoundly alone and unhappy ... (I want to babble on for ages but will bite my tongue) Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Makes me think of all the emotionally unavailable people and how empty one can feel. This is very good!!! Look forward to more. |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
Very well spoken...I know this feeling well and am anxiously awaiting your next post. Dee |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sash....this is a real "ouchie" for me. Hits real close to home. Hope to see more from you. Hardrock |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I must confess....this hits very close to home. I love this poem, esspecilly becase it gave me lots to think about. -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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