Dark Poetry #2 |
Night Wind |
Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Last night your voice Was on the wind... And close, with trembling hands, I held the shutters fast Lest they blow wide And sweep my soul away! |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
Nice. Short but it has a lot of meaning. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Rex, this was so beautifully worded, and so true. Love it. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Lovely so few words, yet speaks volumes.. And what can you do when you hear their voice on the wind, embrace it or hide from it.. Great stuff!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
The love shown in here is unbelievable. Its rather personal, but I know what you feel. --the little one |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Ohmygod. Wow!!!!!! I love the image and the emotions being expressed here! Wow! Fear of being swept away.....Wow! I was compleatly awed by this! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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